Improving Star Wars Episodes I & II by Subtraction

Removing Jar Jar Binks is an obvious first move in improving Episodes I & II (except where necessary)
Removing Jar Jar Binks is an obvious first move in improving Episodes I & II (except where necessary)

<Cross-posted from Drew’s Views>

Having found myself in conversations with people about Star Wars, inevitably, people say “I enjoyed the original trilogy, but did not like Episodes I-III.” Now, that’s a fair comment to make, although I say, “Look, Episodes I & II aren’t that bad, if you remove Jar Jar Binks and the romance scenes in Episode II (the acting and writing for those scenes are so painfully bad).” After a while, I finally decided I needed to create a version whereby I did just that for both Episode I and for Episode II.

However, in continuing to talk with people, I realized it wasn’t enough – I didn’t go far enough in removing material from these two movies. So, I removed far more material: while I largely took the material from my previous versions, I further reduced them, primarily by removing a lot more of Episode I. I removed almost all of the scenes on Tatooine, since we don’t really need to know that much about Anakin’s background and because it seems to drag the movie down.

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Tatooine is kind of a drag in Episode I, so I decided to get rid of all of the Watto scenes (in Episode I) – I left Watto in for Episode II, though

The only piece of Tatooine I left in was Darth Maul being there to attack the Jedi.  In fact, Episode I, with Tatooine largely removed as well as Jar Jar Binks not being there (oh, and I got rid of any of the scenes underwater), becomes essentially about two things: 1) the invasion of Naboo and the resulting battle & 2) the Jedi discovering the existence of the Sith.  Yes, there’s also Anakin happening to blow up the Death Star droid command ship (which is a clear foreshadowing of what his son does in Episode IV).  This reduction certainly makes Episode I move not only more swiftly, but it’s also a lot more action-oriented, which is greatly more enjoyable than seeing Watto haggling with Qui-Gon Jinn!

For Episode II, as I mentioned, I largely left out all of the romance scenes between Anakin Skywalker and Padme, Jar Jar Binks (except where necessary), and when our protagonists find themselves on Geonosis in the factory.

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Removing the horribly scripted and acted romance scenes in Episode II is an obvious move to improving this movie

This leaves the movie to be largely about Obi-Wan Kenobi tracking down the origins of who may be plotting to assassinate Padme.  While this is certainly a lot less action-y, it definitely has an interesting investigative storyline (almost like a cop show), leading to the curious clone-production facility on Kamino.  This is, of course, where things pick up, action-wise: Obi-Wan fights with Jango Fett, then follows him to Geonosis, leading to his encounter with Count Dooku.  Of course, Obi-Wan doesn’t give in to Dooku, leading to his being expected to fight to the death with monsters alongside Padme and Anakin (who exchange a kiss for the first time in this version).  Here on out, I leave in everything from the original version, since it then turns into the best part of the movie, with some great fighting, etc. etc.Star Wars Wednedays - Drews Views

Since these versions of Episodes I & II have had so much material removed from them, I decided to combine them together, since their runtime amounts to be the same as the full cinematic release runtime of either of these movies.

I hope that, when watching this abridged & combined version of Episodes I & II, people will appreciate and enjoy these movies.  Last week, I had a few people over to watch it and comment on it.  Fortunately, they enjoyed it, although they did point out that I left out the scene in Episode I whereby Senator Palpatine is able to manipulate Queen Amidala into making a motion of a no-confidence vote against Chancellor Valorum, leading to the Palpatine’s ascension into the post, which I plan to put back in.  They also pointed out that there were pod-racing comments made about Anakin, which doesn’t make sense without the pod-racing scene being included.  Otherwise, I’m glad they enjoyed it, too!